My entry for
challenge #2 of
atlantis_lvw. The prompt was: Repairs (<400words)
So, I'm still in the running. Lets see what Challenge #3 brings.
( Some Assembly Required (Gen, K+, Zelenka, Weir) )___________Response to feedback/Author's notes:
-- To the person who said it's not really "self-assembling", you got me there. Though I thought those kits that you put together yourself and come with all the tools and bits were referred to as 'self-assembling'. Perhaps I was wrong.
-- The abbreviation of Doctor to Dr, doesn't require a period after it in English/Australian spelling. Why this would be a reason for two people to rank my fic in the bottom three still baffles me anyway. *shrugs*
-- "No need to introduce the characters" Um, that would be this bit
'The scruffy Czech scientist' I assume. I don't think I described Elizabeth and I really didn't think three words was overly descriptive of a character. *is confused* though each to their own.
Thanks for the feedback, even if I am a little confused by it this week.