[livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic is having a hug-day, so here's a couple of additions. Totally unbeta-read.

(Life On Mars, Gen or Sam/Annie, G)
“Sam? Hey, Sam?”

Sam’s fuzzy brain noted the concerned voice, the hard bed; he shivered blinking open his eyes slowly and waiting for the world to focus. Annie smiled gently, the small frown that had creased her forehead gradually receding.

“There you are? What are you doing on the floor? Fold-out can’t be that uncomfortable.”

Sam, noting how he was on the floor of his flat, looked around anxiously as he suddenly remembered the latest visit from the test card girl, It’s your fault you know? Everything’s your fault, but she was gone, back to wherever it was she went. He must have knocked himself out while he was scrambling backwards. Really gotta lay off the booze. Way to go Tyler.

“Sam?” The small frown was back; he was taking too long to answer.

“Must’ve hit my head,” he mumbled.

“Well let me have a look then.” Sam straightened up, before he leaned his head forward as directed and Annie knelt to probe the back of his head. “Only a small bump. Big detective like you, you’ll live.”

Sam chuckled, accepting the hand that she offered to help him up. When he was almost upright again, he leaned back a little, pulling Annie off balance and catching her before she collapsed completely into him. She chuckled, allowing herself to be pulled into the swift hug, before pulling back away.

“Thank you.”

“I really don’t understand you D.I Sam Tyler, now get your coat and let’s go before the Guv -” Annie tilted her head as if remembering an exact quote, “-strings us all up by our wobbly bit and demotes us to cleaning staff.”

Sam chuckled as he grabbed his coat and ushered Annie out the door. “He’d have to catch us first.”



(Supernatural, Bobby, John, wee!chesters, Gen, G)
“Dean, get your stuff and head on up with your brother. I’ll be there in a minute.”

Dean nodded, easily hefting the duffles onto the shoulders of his lanky sixteen-year-old frame, before giving Sam a swift kick in the butt. “Come on stink breath.”

Sam scowled at his brother, shifty eyes calculating revenge, before preceding his big brother to the front door and rapping loudly.

There was a muffled noise behind the door, some clanking and the whining of a dog, before the door opened a crack and Bobby peered out. “Hey boys, look I know I said you could stay the weekend, but it’s just not a good time, there were these kids and love potions and…”

Before he could get out another word, Sam had pushed open the door with surprising force and all but tackled Bobby in a hug. “Nice to see you too, Sam. Look, ah this is what I was talking about. Could you just ease off there a bit, I like breathing… Dean, no Dean, you really don’t.”

“What the hell, boys?” John’s bemused voice could be heard from up the drive, as he watched Bobby become smothered in a puppy-pile of teenage boy exuberance.

Bobby’s eyes widened in horror as John began to walk up the drive, intent on prying off his boys. “John, no. Stay back, please…”

From: [identity profile] sytaxia.livejournal.com


Aaah, the LoM one was incredibly sweet, and I love the way that Annie quoted Gene in it - classic! Nice bit of fluff, there, really great :)

From: [identity profile] starrylizard.livejournal.com


Thank you! :)
I don't really write LoM, so it's a bit of a leap for me. Glad you liked it. :)

From: [identity profile] mistojen.livejournal.com


Haaaaa! I love that Supernatural one! ...Bobby, if you had ANY idea how many fangirls would give away a limb to be in your position... haha

From: [identity profile] longhairedlady.livejournal.com


Hee! LOVE Bobby's predicament! And it leads to a HUG PILE, which can never be a bad thing *g*

From: [identity profile] fawsley.livejournal.com


Love Annie quoting Gene, can just see that tilt of her head. She has lovely mannerisms.

and 'flat' it is, unless you're a pushy estate agent... *rolls eyes*

From: [identity profile] starrylizard.livejournal.com


Thank you! I'm glad it comes across alright! Annie is just lovely.
And yes, than you, I changed it to flat. I so knew that, but I had one of those indecisive moments. :)

From: [identity profile] anniehow.livejournal.com


Heee! Love is in the air! Lovely

(and sporfles for the spn one!)

From: [identity profile] starrylizard.livejournal.com


Thank you! :D I don't think I knew you were a LoM fan. *squee*

(*evil grin*)

From: [identity profile] melzy08.livejournal.com


OMG the SPN one is so gorgeous!!! I love it!
And oh Sam & Annie... I love them.

From: [identity profile] duckyone.livejournal.com


Awww, your Sam/Annie was perfect. I love warm fuzzies so early in the morning, it's gives me hope for my day.

From: [identity profile] labseraph.livejournal.com


OMG. Bobby in puppy pile with Sam and Dean with a heap of John. Something one should see in the show, oh yes. Your brain? Keep feeding it whatever that brought this ficlet about. We need more of these.

From: [identity profile] merlins-sister.livejournal.com


Loved the LOM one... really well done on getting Annie's speech patterns down pat... you can really hear the accent.

From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com


Cute. :)

Favorite lines:

There was a muffled noise behind the door, some clanking and the whining of a dog,

Good details.
Bobby’s eyes widened in horror as John began to walk up the drive, intent on prying off his boys. “John, no. Stay back, please…”

LOL! Keep going, John, keep going! The image will be priceless!

From: [identity profile] starrylizard.livejournal.com


Hehehe! I wonder if this is why Bobby chased John off with a shotgun though. :P Thank you!

From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com


I wonder if this is why Bobby chased John off with a shotgun though.

LOL! Totally!
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