Image of Ronon as a puppy - too cute

Quoting qwirky's review of Sateda, because it amused me and it's so true. It's the lost puppy episode!

( LJ-cut, because there be spoilers, albeit written about puppies )

And ooh I seem to have gained a few friends over the last few days. *waves* Hi! Apparently I just have to go off my nut and write Wraith commentary more often.

Oh and I forgot I can reveal my story over at atlantis_lvw was story #2 - Kiss and Make Up and I'm still in the game. The comments I got were really interesting. Quite a few people voted for me (ie. didn't like my story much), which is kinda cool in a weird way.

I'll post the story to my LJ shortly anyway, but I'm feeling lazy today. I'm just waiting on the new prompt that should come today.

Image of Ronon as a puppy - too cute

Quoting qwirky's review of Sateda, because it amused me and it's so true. It's the lost puppy episode!

( LJ-cut, because there be spoilers, albeit written about puppies )

And ooh I seem to have gained a few friends over the last few days. *waves* Hi! Apparently I just have to go off my nut and write Wraith commentary more often.

Oh and I forgot I can reveal my story over at atlantis_lvw was story #2 - Kiss and Make Up and I'm still in the game. The comments I got were really interesting. Quite a few people voted for me (ie. didn't like my story much), which is kinda cool in a weird way.

I'll post the story to my LJ shortly anyway, but I'm feeling lazy today. I'm just waiting on the new prompt that should come today.

Kiss and Make Up (Teen, slight spoiler for Duet, Possibly McKay/Sheppard)

This was my entry for challenge #1 - Mistaken Identity - at atlantis_lvw. Originally posted anonymously here


Kiss and Make Up (Teen, slight spoiler for Duet, possibly McKay/Sheppard) by Starrylizard
Oooh how could I forget to add that this was beta read by the lovely rinkle, who is also still in the comp. Thanks Rinne!

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Notes: I found the feedback/reasons for votes very interesting. It seems many people found it confusing and couldn't figure out the relationships. My response - that was deliberate and the point of the story. I understand if it didn't work for you though.

There were a few other things mentioned that I agree with completey. Yes this story is a little stilted and probably needs more build up. It did have it to begin with too... but, dude...1000 word limit! I rest my case. *grins* (note to self: Write a simpler story next time, so the word limit isn't such a pain. *g*)

Thankyou to people for the feedback. It was really interesting and hopefully will help me with the next entry.

And hey, I got through to the next round! Yay!

Kiss and Make Up (Teen, slight spoiler for Duet, Possibly McKay/Sheppard)

This was my entry for challenge #1 - Mistaken Identity - at atlantis_lvw. Originally posted anonymously here


Kiss and Make Up (Teen, slight spoiler for Duet, possibly McKay/Sheppard) by Starrylizard
Oooh how could I forget to add that this was beta read by the lovely rinkle, who is also still in the comp. Thanks Rinne!

( Read more... )

Notes: I found the feedback/reasons for votes very interesting. It seems many people found it confusing and couldn't figure out the relationships. My response - that was deliberate and the point of the story. I understand if it didn't work for you though.

There were a few other things mentioned that I agree with completey. Yes this story is a little stilted and probably needs more build up. It did have it to begin with too... but, dude...1000 word limit! I rest my case. *grins* (note to self: Write a simpler story next time, so the word limit isn't such a pain. *g*)

Thankyou to people for the feedback. It was really interesting and hopefully will help me with the next entry.

And hey, I got through to the next round! Yay!