You've really caught John well here, how he's stuck in the repetetive loop of words and hands and how that's the only thing anchoring him, how, as soon as Teyla and Aiden pull him back, he fades out into the shock and fear.
Very intense and I was so relieved (though nowhere near as much as John, I'm sure) to hear Carson say they'd got him back.
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Date: 2007-02-03 12:41 am (UTC)You've really caught John well here, how he's stuck in the repetetive loop of words and hands and how that's the only thing anchoring him, how, as soon as Teyla and Aiden pull him back, he fades out into the shock and fear.
Very intense and I was so relieved (though nowhere near as much as John, I'm sure) to hear Carson say they'd got him back.
Laura.