Dang. This is very, very nice. You give it an emotional truth, a resonance that is absolutely in character. I like that you give them this physical proximity, even intimacy, but you avoid the shmoop and let them be who they really are. They're still clunky about the things that matter and clumsy with each other's hurts, but they try so hard, and I just adored Dean's "Do we need to talk about this?" That's just so *Dean*.
Beautiful job, good psychology for the conversation and pitch-perfect for their voices. And yeah, it leaves a lump in my throat. *saves to mems* Beautiful work. :-) Cheers ~
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Date: 2007-05-13 10:10 pm (UTC)Dang. This is very, very nice. You give it an emotional truth, a resonance that is absolutely in character. I like that you give them this physical proximity, even intimacy, but you avoid the shmoop and let them be who they really are. They're still clunky about the things that matter and clumsy with each other's hurts, but they try so hard, and I just adored Dean's "Do we need to talk about this?" That's just so *Dean*.
Beautiful job, good psychology for the conversation and pitch-perfect for their voices. And yeah, it leaves a lump in my throat. *saves to mems* Beautiful work. :-)
Cheers ~
Erin