Ideal Setting (G, Gen, drabble)

[starrylizard]

Title: Ideal Setting
Author: starrylizard
Rating: PG, Gen (Sam/Sarah)
Spoiler Warnings: Post-Provenance
Summary: “Come on, man. You know you want to.”
Author's Notes: Written for girlfan1979's prompt Post-provenance, sunlight, leaves, laughter and the spn_thur_nights community.
Words: 100


“Come on, man. You know you want to.” Dean stuffed the last piece of pie in his mouth, brushing the crumbs off his shirt.

“Dean!” Sam’s meaningful bitch-face only served to make Dean laugh.

“Chicken.”

“Dean!”

Sam pushed off the car, turned his back on his smirking brother, and walked out into the trees a way. Sunlight filtered down, creating an idyllic setting that made Sam grin. Dean so planned this. Taking out his phone, he scrolled through the numbers.

“Sarah, hey. It’s me, Sam… Yeah? I missed you too.”

Behind him, Dean waggled his eyebrows and pumped the air.

Comments

[exposed1.livejournal.com]

Ah... brotherly pressure! Love it!

Again, just a fantastic job at capturing their relationship and interactions.

[skybound2]

Hehe! Go Dean! It's nice to think that Sam might have kept in touch with Sarah, if only for a little while. Great job.

[girlfan1979.livejournal.com]

Really beautiful. Thank you.

[boogirl13.livejournal.com]

Oh, that Dean!! Sweet little drabble. Thanks for sharing!

[stars91.livejournal.com]

Really nice piece! I really liked Sarah and it would be nice to know that Sam did indeed keep in touch with her, if only because his brother made him! *G*

Great job!

[wilwarin1.livejournal.com]

Way to go, Dean!! He's such an awesome big brother, isn't he. Nice!

[egorstandish.livejournal.com]

Awww! And Dean wouldn't have let up on Sam until he made that call!

[ficwriter1966.livejournal.com]

Of *course* he totally wanted to. And you know Dean would never have let up on the nagging until Sam gave in - because Sam was so obviously taken with Sarah (and she passed muster with Dean).

Nicely done - thanks for taking part in the challenge!

[charis-kalos.livejournal.com]

Beautiful. Drabbles are so hard, trying to capture character and tell a story in such a miniature format, and you've done it wonderfully.

I really liked Sarah, it would be lovely for her and Sam to keep in touch. (Post-canon: I really enjoy the Salvation-verse in which Sam and Sarah are married with three daughters.)

[tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com]

i can totally see this whole scene, from dean's prompting to sam's exasperated bitchface to dean pumping the air in triumph. it's very very them.

[brigid-tanner.livejournal.com]

Go Dean! Sarah was so right for Sam. Love to see Dean pushing them together.

[antigonesgift.livejournal.com]

You completely brightened my day with this drabble. Fantastic!!